Genealogy Poems
my collection of Diamante Poems your opinions.?
1) Harmonic Transgressions
War,
Hostile, Aggressive,
Hatred, Discriminated, Afflicted,
Destructive, Despoil, Friendliness, Freedom-
Unruffled, Liberated, Honoured,
Tranquil, Philanthropic,
Peace.
2.) Existing Extinction
Birth,
Domestic, Family,
Relating, Existing, Developing,
Genesis, Genealogy, Ancestral, Extinction–
Burying, Cremating, Decaying,
Funeral, Ceremonial,
Death.
3.) Climate Change
Flood,
Current, Damp,
Rising, Submerging, Overflowing,
Soppy, Undulate, Absorbent, Thirsty–
Drying, Dehydrating, Desiccating,
Arid, Moistureless,
Drought
4.) Psychic Phenomenon
Psychic,
Prophetic, Transcendental,
Questioned, Mystified, Vibrated,
Spirits, Telepathy, Abilities, Dimensions—
Unorthodox, Paralleled, Unexplained,
Visionary, Relativity,
Phenomenon
Not bad…but your third lines should be participle (-ing verbs), so the first poem’s third line should be “hating, discriminating, afllicting”…the same holds true for line 5. Your third poem does it correctly for lines 3 and 5, but fails to use nouns for line 4. Your words are well chosen…just go back and make them comply with the rules:
1 noun
2 Adjectives
3 Participles (-ing verbs)
4 Nouns
3 Participles (-ing verbs)
2 Adjectives
1 noun
You’re on the right track…just a little editing required, that’s all.
…keep writing
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